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Short, Sweet, and It Sells: How to Trim the Fat From Your Sales Copy

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You have only a brief window of opportunity for your sales copy to catch the attention of your audience. With an average attention span of 8 seconds, people will give your ad no more than a quick glance. The sales copy needs to be compelling enough for them to linger for a moment longer and read what you have to say.

Not only do humans have attention spans that are shorter than that of a goldfish (which is said to be nine seconds), but humans are easily distracted. Between mobile devices, constant alerts, and competing demands, it's no wonder that it is hard to get someone's attention.

It's tempting to say a lot. After all, you want your audience to have as much information as possible. But effective digital sales copy is about saying a lot with fewer words. The message needs to be strong enough that the audience wants to learn more but short enough to be absorbed quickly.

Before You Begin
It can be hard to know what content to include in digital sales copy. On the one hand, you want to provide as much information as possible. On the other hand, your message needs to be focused and evoke a reaction from your audience.

Your best approach is to show the audience how your product or service can benefit them. You need to present a problem and your product or service as a solution. 

Your copy also needs to point out why you are the best solution. Why should the audience choose you over your competitors? What sets you apart?
Making sure you have copy that hits the mark involves asking yourself some questions before you even start writing.


Know Your Audience
Your copy needs to resonate with your target audience. Research it well and know what is going to grab that audience. If you have an option in platforms, select the medium where your audience spends the most time.

Different demographics will respond in different ways. Age, household income, geographical region, income level... these factors all play into how people perceive the "problem" you're trying to solve. You want a message that speaks to them.

Define Your Goal
What is the outcome that you want from your sales copy? Are you trying to get the reader to make a purchase? Or have your reader make a call or schedule a demo?

Without a clear goal, you will not be able to write effective sales copy. The whole point of an ad is to convince the reader to take action. Everything within the ad should be in support of that goal.

Of course, advertising is not only about a single ad. If your goals are more long-term, the copy will look different. Sales copy can also support building brand awareness so that you can increase your customer base over time.

Choose an Approach
You can write an ad from many angles, but you will lose your readers if you throw too much at them. Instead, it is better to focus on one approach within a single ad. For example, you can:
  • Appeal to an Emotion: Try to create an emotional response, like excitement, fear, or FOMO
  • Present an Idea: Introduce your reader to a problem or a change in behavior
  • Tell a Story: You want your reader to be connected to an experience
People buy because they see themselves in what you are presenting. It is either a current pain point or an aspiration. Focus your copy on the approach that will best speak to the reader.

Features vs. Benefits
Sales will always have objections or reasons not to buy. "Too expensive," "too complicated," and "not now" are common objections.

It can be tempting in sales copy to overcome all objections by listing a bunch of features, but this is a mistake. Readers may not understand all of the features or become too lost in the details.

Instead, focus on the benefit. You have already identified the approach. Now how will the customer benefit from your product or service?

For example, if your approach is to create excitement, how can you tap into that excitement with a benefit? Why should the readers' excitement drive them to a purchase?

Create a Call to Action
The ultimate result of your sales copy should be that the reader takes action. Whether it is visiting a website, signing up for a newsletter, or adding to cart, the action is the immediate response that your ad should encourage.

Your goals, approach, and benefits should all be in sync with what you are asking the reader to do. It might be that you work out your call to action first and then build the rest of the copy around it. Then come back and tweak your call to action once you have the rest of the copy figured out.

Your call to action should be strong, but at the same time, people don't like to be "sold." They want to feel like they have reached the decision to take the next step on their own.

Now Trim That Copy!
Many platforms don't merely encourage short copy: they require it. Depending on your medium, you need to find ways to be concise and compelling at the same time. 

The cleaner your copy, the more likely you can reach your audience. Here are some tips:
  1. Revise multiple times - it likely won't be perfect in the first attempt
  2. Think about the medium and cater your message to that platform
  3. Use compelling words that flow well and are easy to understand
  4. Cut the fluff and remove unnecessary words
  5. Test different versions of your copy and track results

Improving Your Sales Copy
Writing powerful sales takes practice. We're not all Don Draper from Mad Men who could spin the perfect tagline by instinct. Effective sales copy is a combination of playing with words, testing out your audience's reactions, and adjusting the messaging as needed.

Writing across multiple channels means not only having effective copy but also having a consistent message and tone. To learn more about copywriting across the entire digital ecosystem, sign up for our 360° copywriting online course.
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    • Copywriting 101
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    • 360 Copywriting Online
  • ABOUT
  • CONTACT
  • BLOG
    • Copywriting Lessons from David Ogilvy
    • 9 Copywriting Lessons from Robert Collier
    • 9 Copywriting Lessons From John Caples
    • 8 Copywriting Lessons from John Powers
    • Scientific Advertising: 10 Copywriting Lessons from Claude Hopkins
    • A Review of Current AI Copywriting Tools
    • Top San Francisco Ad Agencies
    • Learn How To Write Conversationally To Engage Your Audience
    • Top Skills for a Copywriter
    • Launch A Career In Advertising With These Top Portfolio Schools
    • UX Copywriting and Short Copy ​
    • Discover How To Write Killer Copy That Converts
    • What is Copywriting? >
      • What Alternative
    • 10 Great Headlines from Classic Ads
    • Why Tone Can Make or Break Your Copy
    • How to Use Statistics, Facts and Quotes to Craft Compelling Copy
    • Great Copywriters Use Verbal Imagery to Tell a Story
    • Master the Art of Headline Writing!
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    • 5 Brands with Amazing Copywriting Teams
    • Master Hard and Soft CTAs for Superior Sales Writing
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    • Proven Copywriting Methods Emotional Advertising
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    • Copywriting Insights: How to Test Ad Copy for Best Results
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    • The Pros and Cons of Copywriting Part–Time
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    • Two of the Biggest Mistakes Beginning Copywriters Make
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    • Why I Love Being a Copywriter
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    • The Next Big Idea: Creative Advertising Ideation
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    • Top London Ad Agencies
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    • Ideation and How to Find the Next Big Idea
    • Creative Advertising Methods and Madness
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    • Email Copywriting Tactics
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    • How to Craft the Ultimate Product Description
    • B2B VS B2C Sales Copy: 6 Crucial Differences You Should Know About
    • The Next Big Idea: Creative Advertising Ideation
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    • Landing Pages and Lead Magnets: Everything You Need to Know
    • How to Do Better Creative Advertising: Why and How It Works
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    • How to Break Into the Copywriting Industry
    • What Everybody Should Know About Online Advertising Portfolio
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    • Don’t Let Imposter Syndrome Keep You from Writing Great Copy
    • How to Design Great Digital Ads
    • Ad Campaigns: Nike Just Do It
    • Copywriting Examples: Google Ads
    • Best Copywriting Resources: Magazines, Organizations and More
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    • Copywriting Grammar Review: When to Use Commas
    • Our Top 10 Conversion Rate Optimization Copywriting Tips
    • Urgent, Useful, Unique, Ultra-Specific: How to Boost Your Copywriting with the Four U’s
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    • Great Ad Campaigns: "When EF Hutton Talks"
    • Great Ad Campaigns: "We Make Money the Old Fashioned Way"
    • Great Ad Campaigns: Daisy
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    • Top 6 1960s Ad Campaigns and What You Can Learn From Them
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    • How Can AI Copywriting Tools Make Me a Better Copywriter?
    • Why Should You Enter Advertising Contests as a Copywriter?
    • 10 Tips for Writing Captivating Social Media Copy
    • Tips for Improved Direct Response Copywriting
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